美国应用数据硕士录取案例分享~

申请类型

研究生

教育经历

08/2017-05/2021 Syracuse University Major: Applied Mathematics, Minor: Finance, GPA 3.372/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

免托福 GRE 328+1.5

工作经历

无

实习经历

Jilin Zhongmou Asset Appraisal Co., LTD. Changchun, China

Assistant Evaluator 07/16/2019-08/16/2019

• Assisted with the asset appraisal project for the equity value of all the shareholders involved in the proposed equity transfer of Changchun Guangda Automotive Trading Co., LTD.;

• Communicated with customers and participated in on-site investigations and inspection of assets;

• Collected relevant working papers and official documents of the customer company, such as business licenses, company contracts, equity structures, corporate asset distributions, organizational charts, and personnel department settings, financial statements and audit reports, capital verification reports, and minutes of board meetings, certificates of property rights and other materials;

• Checked asset-related documents, including trade contracts, bank statements, subsidiary and general ledgers, balance sheets, accounting vouchers, list of inventory, product price lists, material purchase lists, etc.;

• Communicated and discussed details of the project with relevant project staff members and completed all the other tasks assigned by the project manager

科研经历

 Simulation Business Plan, Course Project for Introduction to Entrepreneurship and Emerging Enterprises Syracuse, NY

Advisor: Prof. Kenneth P Walsleben 01/14/2020-05/01/2020

• Simulated a business plan for a dessert shop in the surrounding neighborhood, including market investigation, feasibility study, product selection, fundraising, company operation, marketing management, and financial projection;

• Collected relevant market and product data we needed and conducted a SWOT analysis to work out the optimal corporate model, the best marketing strategies, and the most effective response mechanisms to cope with all kinds of emergencies in the ever-changing market

Research on Benefit Coordination Mechanism of Corn Industry Chain Changchun, China

Advisor: Mr. Kunliang Shu, Jilin Academy of Agricultural Sciences 05/15/2019-08/15/2019

• Involved in the questionnaire development, field surveys, and data statistics and analysis for the study of reasonable profit distribution patterns of each link in the corn industry chain, aiming to build a regulation system for the support policies and subsidy system based on a reasonable profit distribution pattern;

• Investigated 4 corn deep processing enterprises and 100 small farmers, 30 family farms, and 20 farmer cooperatives and conducted a descriptive statistical analysis of the survey results;

• Participated in the calculations of the corn producer subsidy amounts based on the protection of farmers’ reasonable income, as well as the reasonable subsidy amount relationships between corn, soybeans, and other alternative crops

奖项/证书

Adult and Pediatric First Aid/CPR/AED certificate issued by American Red Cross on 05/02/2019

申请结果

院校

专业

结果

Johns Hopkins University

Business Analytics and Risk Management

拒录

Columbia University

Master of Science in Business Analytics

拒录

Boston University

MS in Business Analytics

Waitlist

Wake Forest University

Master’s in Business Analytics

录取

Brandeis University

Master of Science in Business Analytics

拒录

Syracuse University

M.S. in Business Analytics

录取

Columbia University

MS Applied Analytics

录取

Northeastern University

Master of Science in Business Analytics

录取

背景分析

学生优势：美本背景，应用数学专业

学生劣势：实习经历有限，GRE AW部分成绩较低

文书思路

学生反馈的文书素材中提到了疫情对商业的冲击和她的一些观点。在制作文书的时候，着重在她关注的这个角度进行了拓展和挖掘。分析了一些疫情对于各行业的具体影响，从商业分析的角度谈了学生对于这些影响的认识，以及自己希望能够通过在商业分析专业的所学如何帮助行业克服疫情带来的危机，或者利用疫情带来的商机实现新的发展。同时根据题目要求也写了学生的本科学术背景，掌握的相关知识和技能以及毕业之后的职业规划。

申请总结

学生的美本背景和本科数学专业使学生在申请中占了比较大的优势。商科申请中面试基本是必须的环节，流利的口语和充分的准备是非常必要的。学生口语比较流利，良好的面试表现也是加分项。