【案例分享】托福88斩获UCSB本新录取

申请类型：

美国本科新生

硬件条件：

教育经历：

Sep.2017-Jun.2021 The International Department of Hefei No. 8 High School

Jul. 3rd-Jul. 12th, 2019 Summer Camp Program in American Studiesat Lynoon Institute

语言/标化考试成绩：托福88；SAT Sub-Math 770; ACT Sub-Physics 790

软件条件：

活动经历：无

Oct.2019 World Scholars Cup Comprehensive Competition

Nov. 2018 University of Science and Technology of China (USTC) lab

科研经历

May 2020- Jul. 2020 CIS Research Program with the topic“Constructive Topology and Analysis: Some Classical Theorems Revisited from The Constructive Logic View Point.”

Oct. 2019 Improvement of the Straw

May 2019 Exploring Water Resources, Environmental Practices

奖励证书

2020, Certificate of Participation in the 2020 SIR ISAAC NEWTON Exam

2019,Honorable Award (Division 1) in the Thirty-Fourth AnnualAmerican Association of Physics Teachers (AAPT) Physics Bowl

2019, Bronze Award (National Ranking) in the 2019 Canadian Open Mathematics Challenge

2019, Charity Volunteer Award in the Third Voluntary Selling Activity

申请结果

录取：

University of California, Santa Barbara, Physics/undecided

University of California,Davis, Physics/undecided

Ohio State University, Physics/undecided

Northeastern University, Physics/undecided

Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute, Physics/undecided

拒信：

New York University, Physics/undecided

University of Geog，Physics/undecided

University of Michigan Ann Arbor, Physics/undecided

University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign, Physics/undecided

背景分析

学生优势：

GPA 4.21/5.0相对较高，有相关的科研项目经历和实习经历，发表了两个专利

学生劣势：

托福较低，只有88. 无SAT和ACT成绩。

文书思路

文书前半部分集中在阐述理性思维，后半部分在感性思维以及与理性思维之间的平衡及切换。理性思维部分主要以“对吸管的改良”这个小发明为主要素材，再延伸到Elon Musk-将多学科理科知识相融合。感性思维部分，通过画画、下象棋等重获内心的宁静，通过小提琴和乐队合唱等音乐形式重获激情，这些兴趣爱好的坚持都进一步提升了学生的艺术鉴赏能力、毅力以及韧劲。

申请复盘

W同学第一批早申学校在10月、11月中下旬前后完成递交，RD学校在12月底定校1月初完成递交。起初收到的反馈并不理想，在次年2.1前后就现后来了Geogia Tech,以及Virginia的拒信. 因为托福刷分太晚，导致申请时托福成绩不够，前三十名校由于托福成绩 太低几乎都被拒掉，所幸后来Ohio的offer先到，大家才稍微松了口气。接下来收到的Michigan, NU，Wisconsin等学校均是defer或waitlist状态，最期待的前三十NYU也被拒了。一直到三月中旬，终于惊喜地收到了UCSB飘着彩带的offer，两天后又收到UCD的录取。

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